Should I Go on With This Arranged Marriage? - Comments, page 4

CrazyPebbles21 (100)

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Update soon
Great chapter
I hope your grandma gets better
Can't wait to find out what happens next
Was it Michelle on the phone? Is Michelle there?

April 18th, 2013 at 11:31am

XxRawr-Im-A-KittyxX (100)

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Pleasseee update soon, I really like this story! :3

March 16th, 2013 at 05:00am

CrazyPebbles21 (100)

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Great chapter
Update soon

March 12th, 2013 at 05:41pm

Neon_Skies_Killjoy (100)

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O_o
OH HELL NO

March 5th, 2013 at 01:56am

bmx_chick (100)

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@ jerianne8998
I'd be more than happy to proof read if you' d like?

March 4th, 2013 at 11:23pm

CrazyPebbles21 (100)

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Update soon please
Great chapter
What will Brian do when he finds out what Bo did?

March 4th, 2013 at 06:53pm

ohhh_arra (100)

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@ bmx_chick
sorry. But i really have this bad habit of putting it everywhere. I can't stop. I can't control it, sometimes. I'm really aware of this, my friends say so. Really sorry. :D

February 28th, 2013 at 01:55pm

bmx_chick (100)

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So far your story is great; however, you're over using commas in places where they're not needed. For me, it's taking away from the greatness of the story. If you need someone to proof read your chapters I'm sure more people will be willing to help than you think. c:

February 25th, 2013 at 06:26pm