All Is Lost - Comments

Comment swap.
First the layout is nice. I like how daring you were with using yellow. I think it looks pretty cool. Also it's not too bright, and I can still read the text so there's extra points straight away.

I'm a fan of All Time Low, but I don't really read stories about them, so this was something new. There are a few things that simply reading over this could fix. I don't like how you bold your dialogue. Using italics or something like that is ok, but the bold text distracts me when I'm reading the rest.
I like your writing style though. It's simple. Your characters are likeable and funny, and I feel as if I can relate to them. Overall I like this, I hope your sequel goes well.

@ Valenteen
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/481501/All-Is-Lost-or-Is-It/ This is the sequel I abandoned it halfway through but if people requet chapters I write them c: Thanks for commenting

*new commenter WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE CHAPTERS AGHH I AM SO OBSSESSED WITH THIS. I AGREE WITH TTHE OTHERS THAT THERE HAS TO BE A SEQUEL PLEAASEE. THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FAN FICTIONS I HAVE READ <3 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasadfghjkljhgfdsaadfghkjhgfdsaDSFGHJKGHFDSAsdfghjkhgfdsaasdafghj

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!~

WHAT?? FOREVER!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! OMG! You can't be serious!! *puts on a smile* alright I'm done but seriously, why end now? I was like, 'hold on, that's the end! I mean, come on!" LOL!! Alright, so when's the Sequel hmm?

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SEQUEL NOWWWWW

YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS OMG I WILL FIND YOU AND MAKE YOU FINISH THIS UGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH

Awww, how lovely, I thought this would have more chapters, sadly, it came to an end. Why? Why? WHHHYYYYYYYY? *cries dramatically* Love it!

kjgfb Jacky Jacky Jacky, he likes you back okay!
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Noooo Jack! Alex loves you too! You'll be together forever as soon as you admit your feelings for each other :D

Yay, you're not dead and you updated and it was great :3

You're back! I literally thought you'd died haha
Yay for new update that explains a backstory :DD

Everyone loves Jack's secret Lebanese ninja skills ;)

Band fics aren't really my thing, so instead of commenting on the story (which is very well written and has good flow) I am going to offer a few minor stylistic comments. I'm no expert so these are simply based on my opinion. Bolding dialogue is a little much and seems unnecessary. Also, for flashbacks, maybe use dividers of some sort and italics. Great work though.

First off, you need to fix your title! Having improper title capitalization can get your story reported, which you want to avoid!
I think this is written well and you have a very nice plot! The characters are funny and charming and it was an all around good read!

Yay, finally someone who can write Jalex really will! I love how you have got the characters' personalities down to a T! I can genuinely see some of the ATL boys says some of the lines in your story! Although its different, I quite like how you have bolded the dialogue. It makes it easier to read and, I can imagine that if you wanted to, it would be simple to just read the dialogue! Really great fic! :)

Ahhhhh BBT reference!!! I'm dying!

OMG THIS IS AMAZING!

I usually don't read All Time Low/Jalex fanfics, but I actually found myself really enjoying this one! Alex and Jack are so cute together! Eeek! Haha Alex checking out Jack's ass- I definitely would ;).

I love how Jack gets post-concert depression- don't we all know how that feels? I definitely do.

The writing in this is absolutely fanfuckingtastic. KEEP IT UP!

Hahaha, this chapter made me laugh with all their silly "all time..." band names, so good. I'm excited to see them reunited as a band and see what songs they'll play, it's gonna be great, can't wait for more.

Haha hooray for the awkward turtle! :P Also whoop Playground X are back ;)