Oh god, oh god no...... :'( This has bad written ALL over it.
I'm really scared something bad's gonna happen. And it probably will, but PLEASE don't kill anyone off, and have Liam and Zayn together. I don't care if anything else falls to crap XO Just have them together.
And I'm not liking the hints that Zayn is almost close to start getting over Li.
This is torture....
Please update soon, and I can't wait to read Fickle Heart! ^.^
so...i'm wondering what the big incident is. and i love this story and i'm not a fan of one direction and to be honest when i saw this story i had no clue who was who so i did some research and now i know who each member is and how they look. although i'm still not a fan of the music i enjoy this story so much, i think it's because you're an amazing writer (:
Really interested to see where you're going with the dates and stuff and what the 'incident' is. Awww the 'infinity and beyond' thing was so cute :D Great update!!
Its gotta be fucking Christmas today, coz you and perhaps one or two other of my favorite writers updated today. Like, OHMIGOD, spazz! Anyway, it may have been short, but it did curb my appetite for an update. However, don't keep us waiting like that again after such an amazing 1st chapter.
Its just in-humane to do so, aha. But this update was cute, when Liam was clutching his little Woody doll, it got me straight in the feels, haha.
Oh man this was a FANTASTIC beginning. I am honestly so excited to see what's going to happen next! I can't wait for some more details on their lives (:
Yes! Yes! God bless your Ziam soul, you beautiful lady, you. I was seriously hoping you'd come around and make this into a full-fledged story. And you did! :) God, this 1st chapter already has me insanely wanting more. The rawness of Zayn and Liam in that bit at the end, oh god. I could actually feel Zayn's heartache. And I'm really anxious as to know what "the incident" is. Fgjk. Update, update, update. Good lord I'm loving this, Jenn.