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  • AHLICE

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    i'm seriously almost crying because this is so beautiful and i'm just waiting, just waiting for you to finish. youre such an amazing writer.
    February 25th, 2013 at 06:54pm
  • L0V3E

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    Chapter 3 and 4 are the same. :(
    December 5th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • she's so high.

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    This made my day, btw. Like, you don't even know XD Sorry for the double post.
    December 4th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • she's so high.

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    Oh god, oh god no...... :'( This has bad written ALL over it.

    I'm really scared something bad's gonna happen. And it probably will, but PLEASE don't kill anyone off, and have Liam and Zayn together. I don't care if anything else falls to crap XO Just have them together.

    And I'm not liking the hints that Zayn is almost close to start getting over Li.

    This is torture....

    Please update soon, and I can't wait to read Fickle Heart! ^.^
    December 4th, 2012 at 03:20am
  • the_space_between

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    What's gonna happen?? I can't even take this! I really hope you update soon because I love this....oh forbidden love....*swoons*
    December 4th, 2012 at 02:14am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    I can't even......I LOVE <3
    July 24th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • Scabbed-Wings

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    i love the story so far, please update :)
    July 17th, 2012 at 08:40am
  • danimurphy27

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    omg what incident is it!!!!!!!! killing me with suspense!
    Love this story so much
    update soon!
    June 28th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • justeva.

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    so...i'm wondering what the big incident is.
    and i love this story and i'm not a fan of one direction and to be honest when i saw this story i had no clue who was who so i did some research and now i know who each member is and how they look. although i'm still not a fan of the music i enjoy this story so much, i think it's because you're an amazing writer (:
    June 26th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • luke ham ham.

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    Good update!
    I want more soon!
    Update soon? (:
    June 26th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • charlie smith

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    Really interested to see where you're going with the dates and stuff and what the 'incident' is. Awww the 'infinity and beyond' thing was so cute :D
    Great update!!
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • danimurphy27

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    aww. I love this story so much!
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • white elephants.

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    Its gotta be fucking Christmas today, coz you and perhaps one or two other of my favorite writers updated today. Like, OHMIGOD, spazz! Anyway, it may have been short, but it did curb my appetite for an update. However, don't keep us waiting like that again after such an amazing 1st chapter.

    Its just in-humane to do so, aha. But this update was cute, when Liam was clutching his little Woody doll, it got me straight in the feels, haha.

    UPDATE SOON POR FAVOR.
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • luke ham ham.

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    This is sooo good!
    I love it already, I can't wait for more!
    Please update soon <3
    June 11th, 2012 at 03:24am
  • Rylie_

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    Amazing beginning. I am really excited to see what you have planned.
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:24am
  • charlie smith

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    Oh man this was a FANTASTIC beginning. I am honestly so excited to see what's going to happen next!
    I can't wait for some more details on their lives (:
    May 17th, 2012 at 12:37am
  • L0V3E

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    I'm lovin' it!
    May 16th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • danimurphy27

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    Bless you beautiful soul you Zaim loving angel! I have been waiting for a chapter foreva! and it was worth the wait. You are a saint! update soon <3
    May 16th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • danimurphy27

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    Bless you beautiful soul you Zaim loving angel! I have been waiting for a chapter foreva! and it was worth the wait. You are a saint! update soon <3
    May 16th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • white elephants.

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    Yes! Yes! God bless your Ziam soul, you beautiful lady, you. I was seriously hoping you'd come around and make this into a full-fledged story. And you did! :) God, this 1st chapter already has me insanely wanting more. The rawness of Zayn and Liam in that bit at the end, oh god. I could actually feel Zayn's heartache. And I'm really anxious as to know what "the incident" is. Fgjk. Update, update, update. Good lord I'm loving this, Jenn.
    May 16th, 2012 at 12:41am