Unwonderland - Comments

I love this story! All the characters are awesome! :D

Good chapter, can't wait for more developmet between alexias and abel :D

Ominous

I must know what happens next!

This is an amazing story. :) And I agree with her, I like them mad...

Yeah sure actually I was about to update now. Now what you're saying is you want me to post the whole chapter on your profile?

when u update put a post it on my profile want to read more...say tomorrow??

i love it..very..alice unoriginal..you cat is creepy but your writing is good albeit a little confusing..a better flow and descriptions will make it just right i think...

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Thanks and I will! X3

I love this story ^-^. I'm just a reader not a writer so I don't think my input on how you write your stories would help but i really like it :) keep it going please?

Thank you! :D

interesting :) it's off to a good start. keep it up!

Thanks so much! and thanks for the heads up I'll totally look into that and try to fix it! ^_^

I really like were your story is going, thus far. I love Alice in Wonderland. c: My only thing is with the flow of the sentences, between dialogue. Seems a tiny bit choppy? Maybe it is the way I am reading it, I've no idea. But, all in all, great start. I'm subscribing so I can't wait to read more. ^_^ Cheers, love~