More Than This - Comments

@ Maddi;
Thank you :) and i can totally see where you're coming from, and i will keep it in mind when writing future stories.
And i will keep writing as long as people want to read my stories.!

I think the only thing I didn't like about this story was the big information dump at the beginning. It was the part where she was like let me explain things a little bit and then started talking about how Liam was her brother and Louis was Becca's brother that she had a crush on. I would have liked to learn about that stuff in a more elegant matter, because it was kind of a more boring start to the story. but other than that I think the story is good is good so far and I hope you keep writing!

@ MiePetersen
Can't wait to read the next update so glad your back writing

@ lilstunner89
Thank you so much, it really means alot :)

Really love this story