The Annals of Atlantiopolis: Cosmology - Comments

Thank you. Once I write some actually stories in the mythology I'm hoping it'll feel more natural.

I kind of have mixed feelings about this. It's definitely an original idea, but I'm not too sure how I feel about it. I like the your style of writing, and although I found myself a little lost at times I also found that the appendix was helpful. I like mythology and stuff, but this isn't really my type of story. With that being said, I think it was well written. You definitely have talent. Keep writing!