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  • fantasygirltexas

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    I'm completely broken hearted over how this one ended. I cried with him outside of that airport and I'm scared they won't find each other again.
    November 17th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • Nia_Flores

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    This has to be one of my favorite stories of this whole site! I love it! I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the way it's written & I love the drama! It was just fantastic. & I can't wait to start on the sequel. You're a great writer. I really love your style.
    February 8th, 2013 at 04:40pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Wow..I dont even know what exactly to say except Brian!!!!!WHY!!!. I cant believe he did that to her after the awards show. Grrr....I was so sad at the end, i literally almost cried when I read that last chapter...that was some magnificent writing!!! I cant wait to read 'Wanted'. I love all of your characters so much and I just need more more more, please post soon!!!!:) Your one talented lady, this whole story is just pure fucking gold!!!
    October 16th, 2012 at 07:55am
  • YourVengeance

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    i was like..NOOOOOOOOOO..it can't end like this!!! but then i saw that theres going to be a sequel!!! :) hahah i loved this ending though <3
    October 10th, 2012 at 08:59am
  • cattfeine

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    I can't. I tried and I just I cannot - I'm speechless. Whoa.
    October 10th, 2012 at 08:00am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Okay, so I'm pretty much speechless. The entire story is amazing and this...was epic. Eliza did the right thing. A break is what they need. Hell, as much bullshit as they've been through, I'd have already called it quits. But I can't stand the thought of these two not ending up together. lol. I teared up at the end. I'm SOOO ready for the sequel.
    October 10th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • mistery gurl

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    ive read the prequel and am up to date with this one. i hope brian feels like shit when he finds out. maybe they should only be friends. if she can even manage that. im hooked!!!
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    October 5th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    Really Brian? Ugh! Update soon!! :)
    October 4th, 2012 at 12:46am
  • gothique4

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    men will be men when strippers are around - doesn't mean he's going to do anything but with their history Eliza is bound to think the worst

    his comments were a bit insensitive but then again he's a guy and what guy in a rock band is going to say "I'm going back to the hotel with my girlfriend" when he can play up his image a little
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:33am
  • YourVengeance

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    how can brian do that to her!!!!!!! but im glad theres another story since theres only 1 chapter left!!!! hope u UPDATE soon!!!
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:17am
  • YourVengeance

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    how can brian do that to her!!!!!!! but im glad theres another story since theres only 1 chapter left!!!! hope u UPDATE soon!!!
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:17am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Brian may be playing a part, but it doesn't change a thing. It fucking hurts to watch someone that you knew--or THOUGHT you knew--turn into a total jackass for the benefit of others. He was being so sweet with her and it could have easily led to the talk they so desperately need to have, but instead, he went all Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde on her and turned into King Douche. -____-

    Anyhoodle, I can't wait for the next update! (and the third story, of course). Thank you, thank you, thank you, for the promotion!!!!!!!!
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:17am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    I really need another update, as soon as possible!!! Please!!! <3
    October 3rd, 2012 at 06:15am
  • powerofkisses

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    I really like this story but I don't like how a lot of bad stuff contuines to happen. At least be happy for more than a chapter....
    October 3rd, 2012 at 05:45am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    200TH COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Also, I loved this chapter. They've got to work it out, they just HAVE to. And smooth, Brian, real smooth...the one bed trick. I'd have punched him if I was her. But oh well. I hope the trip gives them time to sort some stuff out and maybe fix things. :-)
    September 24th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • gothique4

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    I love this update and I'm glad the she decided to go after all. A bit sneaky of Brian not to mention the one bed. I hope that they can get a few minutes alone to have a good talk
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:21am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    So excited for the next update! <3
    September 24th, 2012 at 12:18am
  • A7X-PapaRoachLvr

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    Update again soon!! Please!
    September 24th, 2012 at 12:03am
  • Norman Reedus

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    Aw, the end of that chapter.. so aw :o Loved this. Update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon mkay? :D
    September 23rd, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • blissful.blackout

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    Ahhh. This. Was. So. Great. <3 xD
    September 18th, 2012 at 10:19pm