This has to be one of my favorite stories of this whole site! I love it! I love the characters, I love the plot, I love the way it's written & I love the drama! It was just fantastic. & I can't wait to start on the sequel. You're a great writer. I really love your style.
Wow..I dont even know what exactly to say except Brian!!!!!WHY!!!. I cant believe he did that to her after the awards show. Grrr....I was so sad at the end, i literally almost cried when I read that last chapter...that was some magnificent writing!!! I cant wait to read 'Wanted'. I love all of your characters so much and I just need more more more, please post soon!!!!:) Your one talented lady, this whole story is just pure fucking gold!!!
Okay, so I'm pretty much speechless. The entire story is amazing and this...was epic. Eliza did the right thing. A break is what they need. Hell, as much bullshit as they've been through, I'd have already called it quits. But I can't stand the thought of these two not ending up together. lol. I teared up at the end. I'm SOOO ready for the sequel.
ive read the prequel and am up to date with this one. i hope brian feels like shit when he finds out. maybe they should only be friends. if she can even manage that. im hooked!!! *subscribed*
men will be men when strippers are around - doesn't mean he's going to do anything but with their history Eliza is bound to think the worst
his comments were a bit insensitive but then again he's a guy and what guy in a rock band is going to say "I'm going back to the hotel with my girlfriend" when he can play up his image a little
Brian may be playing a part, but it doesn't change a thing. It fucking hurts to watch someone that you knew--or THOUGHT you knew--turn into a total jackass for the benefit of others. He was being so sweet with her and it could have easily led to the talk they so desperately need to have, but instead, he went all Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde on her and turned into King Douche. -____-
Anyhoodle, I can't wait for the next update! (and the third story, of course). Thank you, thank you, thank you, for the promotion!!!!!!!!
Also, I loved this chapter. They've got to work it out, they just HAVE to. And smooth, Brian, real smooth...the one bed trick. I'd have punched him if I was her. But oh well. I hope the trip gives them time to sort some stuff out and maybe fix things. :-)
I love this update and I'm glad the she decided to go after all. A bit sneaky of Brian not to mention the one bed. I hope that they can get a few minutes alone to have a good talk