Ooh I want to know what happens next, as I'm assuming it's Brian on the doorstep (well I hope it is at least) :-)
I'd love to read a third story as I just love Eliza and Brian together, but I just hope that there's not as much drama. Those poor kids have already been through the ringer and if any more skanks try to get down Brian's pants Eliza is likely to kill them lol.
Well, good. Now I'm curious. Why do you tease me this way? lol.
Gah, those memories...all they do is cause pain right now. Nothing's worse than having such wonderful memories with someone who (you feel) doesn't care anymore. =/
Very much awesomeness!!!!!!! Eliza's got the old fire back, and I LOVE seeing it! Glad she managed to restrain herself before she accidentally/on purpose slugged Brian one, though. lol.
That was fuckin awesome! I have been waiting for Eliza to come unhinged on kaicey for a while now and it was worth the wait! Great update can't wait for more!
oh my freaking god this chapter was all kinds of awesome - I've been waiting and waiting for Eliza to kick the skank's ass into next week from the minute that whore showed up. And FINALLY Val's seen the light - why the hell didn't she fire her before if she's been stealing money as well??? I would have fired her on the spot if I found that shit out, never mind that she's been dry humping Brian like a desperate dog
Brian better get his ass into gear and go chasing after Eliza, but it may be safer if he waits for her to cool down lol
Oh my effing god...you don't understand how long I have been waiting for her to kick her ass. I was like oh hell yeah... She's about to get her ass kicked. And I don't blame Eliza for still being mad at Brian. I would be too.