So apparently there weren't enough characters in there to make it a proper comment swap comment: I only read the first chapter because I didn't like it how I was just dropped right in the middle of something. I like it when authors take time to set the scene first, which might be a bit hypocritical because I usually find it easier to do what you've done instead. As I mentioned, this isn't really my genre of stories, but I'm sure there are a lot of people out there who will appreciate what you've done with this