Oh my goodness! This story is great! This story is actually very descriptive (see, I told you that you'd be good at it). You described the settings and even the outfits of the characters, good job. Too bad that Rose is the mean girl, because she's pretty. By the way, that band tee you described (with the effed-up unicorn on it)...that sounds like a Dot Dot Curve :) tee shirt that I saw once. Was that the tee that you were describing?