The Guillotine. - Comments

MAN IM SO EXCITED I GOT TO SEE THE END OF THIS STORY AND I COULDNT THINK OF A BETTER ENDING SO THANK U THIS STORY WAS PERFECT!!!!!!

I'm so excited Jacky got better! I can't wait to read the last chapter :)

This is so awesome!

smut is needed. badly. please?????

^-^

I ALWAYS want Ronnie and Jacky sex. Who doesn't. Whoever they are, they are crazy and should be introduced to the amazing world of RONNIE and JACKY sex.
I am a little sleep drunk and kinda sambuca drunk. But it's all okay. Coz soon there will be sex.
That was really good and I think it is better without more bloodshed details and that. It gives it all more balance,makes everything more even and relaxed plus I love the cute little normal domestic couple feel to this chapter. It is a good grounding chapter and Kind of increases the insight into there normal lives.

Yay! Max is gone and Ronnie and Jacky can have hot steamy sex now!

There was no blood but as long as everyone is happy im happy

Aw! Glad Jacky is ok. and happy that Ronnie let Craig go. Yes, for Sexy time ;P

Thank you and YAY.
Jackys safe and him and Ronnie make an utterly cute couple. So brilliant and I love it.
This update was the most perfect thing to end for a while on.

That gif of Jacky(second picture)... WHERE IS THAT FROM?!
Oh, and this story is sosososo perfect. Seriously. It gets better with every chapter, and I didn't even know that was possible. <3

They're going to die they're going to die I'm so happy that they're going to die

I FUCKING HATE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jacky should have bit Max's little prick off

Craig and Max better die soon.
Like really really soon.
Also is it possible that you could get the update out before 6pm tomorrow as am going away and really want to know if Jacks is okay.
If not then dont worry, coz I know I am asking a lot.
This was so good. It made me cringe which I don't believe I have done more than once before while reading Dom/Fertile fics. So go you.

Ronnie you have to get there NOW

Ohhhh. Bitches are gonna get killed by Ronnie. Really hope he finds Jacky in time.
Love the update.

oooh shit just got serious, can't wait for more :)

NOOOOOO! NOT MY JACKY RONIE YOU HAVE TO SAVE HIM!!!!! Oh Craig, Max I think Ishould just tell you that um......your so dead when Ronnie gets to you

I love the story please update soon

Please update some more!
I want to see them get together finally! :)