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  • FlaFlyer

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    That was a wonderful look at where they are two years into their marriage. After all these two had been though and how they became a couple, it's nice to see them so much in love. I especially loved the emotion in your writing. Beautiful...
    November 5th, 2012 at 09:27pm
  • samemistakess

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    id love more stories about them :)
    October 2nd, 2012 at 07:08am
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    Glad i found this! It was really well written and showed plenty of emotion. I'd love another story about these two!
    July 20th, 2012 at 08:48pm
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    This was really good. Loved it.
    May 24th, 2012 at 04:12pm
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    So glad I just found this! Great update :)
    May 14th, 2012 at 06:13pm
  • JTCC1950

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    I was so excited to see the again!! Great update!
    May 8th, 2012 at 07:13am
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Great job, loved it!
    May 7th, 2012 at 07:57am
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    While I have not liked the craziness of this year's playoffs, it certainly lended itself to this wonderful update in the lives of Melinda and Jon. I have missed them. Their encounter with Coach Q was certainly embarrassing!!

    Thank you for the one shot! Hope to see you writing something else again soon.
    May 7th, 2012 at 03:38am
  • headintheclouds

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    Beautiful job! Loved it!!
    May 7th, 2012 at 02:20am
  • bublbabie

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    you should totally keep going. I loved the first story and would love a continuation of it
    May 7th, 2012 at 02:14am
  • RosiePosie08

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    I seriously cried. I love this.
    May 7th, 2012 at 01:40am
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