Different Directions - Comments

@ WolfGirl96
Thank you so much I hope you enjoyed it and Please read my other story. ;)

That was an amazayn ending to that story. I loved it. Great job and good luck on your writing in the future.

For starts I must admit I don't know who One Direction is so this is a test run on my knowledge eh? :D I'll probably be googling these blokes eventually as I have two budding teenage sisters.

Anyhoo.

I just want to mention that dialouge is usually presented with a new line for each new speaker. Being as such
"Hi?"
"Hello! How are you?"
"Good, thanks yourself?"

This is just a helpful tip as in the first chapter you have a few blocky chapters that consist of dalouge among two or more people and it can be a bit confusing.

This is of course a personal opinion but I think the who situation in the first chapter seems a bit rushed. You're slidding through important events in a persons like like a slip and slide, glazing over the emotional aspects of it all. Of course it's all a different style of writing, and I'm not trying to be in any sense hateful, but the character's havent even been defined in the sense of their person and you're already establishing a giant connection like adoption and long lost twin.

Overall I read the first chapter and although not confused by what happened but more so on why it happened so quickly.

Happy writing. :)

Thanks

thank you this is an amazing story

thanks

fantastic update!

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!

Keep writing and don't pay attention to those who don't know something good when they see it!! :)

fuck the haters bro!! Just keep writing I'll keep reading so you'll always have at least one :D

Thanks

Love it!!! Update soon!!

Thank you so much. I will be updating tommorow after noon after my school lets out.

so intense. those kidnappers gotta go man their getting in the way of those amazing Larry moments I'm waiting for.
great story, update soon.

Thank you really appreciate it :)

GIRLY, THANK YOU FOR WRITING A WONDERFUL STORY ABOUT SOME WONDERFUL BOYS. Hah, it's good, ust needs a little brushing up? It just all seems a little fast. I dunno what I'm talking bout actually. But other than that you have some new details and ideas that I've never seen and well there are loads of fanfics out there so that's impressive! So thanks again and update sooooooooon. i want to see where this goes! Okay later alligator! x

Thanks for telling me. I will make sure i edit it. :)

No offense, but your grammar is terrible. Please make a more interesting layout and fix your errors, and maybe more people will read.