Coalesce. - Comments

I am not a glee fan, but I love your story. It just kept me smiling. I think that it is so adorable. It has been said before but I think within the first chapter, maybe add more descriptions here and there, they can really make a story pop to the reader so to speak. Regardless, I loved this and please keep up the amazing work :)

That chapter was full of fluff! So fucking adorable!

So, I usually don't read Glee fan fictions, but this is really great. I like the way you write and how you place and put things together. And I like how you tie in their love for musicals. It's defiantly cute and amazing. Keep up the great work. <3

This story is very well written, the description is very nice and very well described. This is a really great story to follow and I'm recommending it. I'm hoping that the next chapter will be out soon ! XØ.

I loved the first chapter! :o
If you're looking for some criticisms, here's some;
It'd be easier to imagine if you gave more thorough descriptions earlier.
I give you props for the believable dialogue and whatnot.
I really enjoyed reading this.
I cannot wait for you to add more, I'll be reading it as soon as possible.
Thanks for giving me such a great read!

They are already so cute together! Like, REALLY cute!

I love this chapter and how calm he is about introducing him to his daughter.
So cute!

What caught my eyes was the fact that you've used "Some Nights" lyrics in the summary.

Didn't realize this was a Glee fic at first. I was actually gonna click off it but you're such a good writer and it's such an amazing start. It's incredible and I love how OF it is!

Just brilliant lovely, brilliant! <3