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  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Nope it wasn't the right idea and funny how people start to see how much they are missing when someone moves on and starts to have a great life.
    Yeah I get it. It takes a lot out of you when you are typing up something and it can really take energy away from you and all that.
    November 6th, 2012 at 05:33am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ Lloyd Christmas
    After Kyle saw her pregnant did anyone expect for him to be quiet? I don't know if it's clear but Kyle and Pen's mom are kind of close and she approves highly of him, for some reason I'll never understand.
    Penelope deserves better and that's why she has Robert but let's see what happens next :)
    November 6th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    WTF?!
    Those assholes just don't give up!!!
    Penelope doesn't deserve them at all. Smdh !
    November 6th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    Let's put his bluntly: Kyle has no balls what so ever. I can't understand him completely myself but seeing Penelope pregnant and moving on, made him a bit 'crazy' on the way that he decided that he had to do something. Partnering up with her mom wasn't the right idea.
    Thank you for the compliment on the writing darling, I was a bit afraid that it wouldn't look real enough so it's good to know that it's well-written :)
    Well I had planned to end on Chapter 30 but it'll probably have only one more or really end on Chapter 30, I'm not sure yet it depends on how what I planned flows as I write. I've decided the course of the story, it's a matter of my brain recovering from the tests and I'll be a typing machine.
    November 6th, 2012 at 01:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    Kyle is completely mental and not even for a second I really believed in what he was saying. I just think her mother just bribed him or forced him to say such things and even if he did love her, what a horrible way to confess his feelings? I mean come on, she's with someone aka Robert and having his child. Why on Earth would he even go after her when she is already moving on, clearly she did so long ago and ugh that is just so frustrating. The chapter was beautifully written as always, love and as for Pen's condition. Holy crap...I'm actually a bit on the edge of my seat and sort of excited to see how this turns out or how you go on with this. I know you said the story is ending soon or close to ending so I am wondering what you are going to do now. It can go so many different ways and I am just jumping out of my seat.
    November 6th, 2012 at 01:15am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ Bakers Gonna Bake
    Hello there :D
    I believe that it's the first time that I speak with you, so nice to meet you!
    Thank you reading too and yes 'Holy Shit' is a good way to describe this chapter.
    November 5th, 2012 at 10:44pm
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    Holy shit.
    November 5th, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    yeah it's really bad.
    October 28th, 2012 at 06:11pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    Oh Lord... that's serious and bad.
    October 28th, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    It's popular over here too and I haven't read it either. Well I read like a page of it from my friend's Kindle and horrible horrible horrible. The worst book I have ever laid eyes on and wondered how in the hell it reached book shelves.
    October 28th, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    I have never read 50 Shades and I don't plan too actually. It's getting pretty popular over here too.
    Aww thank you love, you are very kind :)
    October 28th, 2012 at 12:40pm
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    To each their own. I mean go at your own pace and write whatever you like, that is the only reason why 50 Shades is popular because of the whole bondage and sex thing. Such a horrible book btw. They do have a deep connection and it's different and real which I love.
    October 28th, 2012 at 03:44am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    Indeed, dear.
    I understand that there are dirty minds out there, I have my own but I don't express it much right now. Yes, because Tom and Paty, in my head, have such possibilities for a real, deep connection and relationship. I can't really express it in words but god, those two make me smile.
    You're welcome dear! It's all very heart-felt.
    October 28th, 2012 at 03:36am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    Close to it depending on what we are doing. :)
    People are just dirty minded and want things to happen fast and very impatient. It's just another level of sad that they don't want anything to really develop. You're welcome. I speak nothing, but the truth. It would be a lie and I understand that you write in that way to let us in what they like and so on.
    Aw thank you love.
    October 28th, 2012 at 03:15am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    I believe that we really talk daily ahah No promises then ;)
    I get that people prefer smut but I haven't designed any of my stories, yet, to be too smutty. Thanks for saying that dear, it means a lot to me. Paty and Tom seem too perfect, I am aware of it but it's really on purpose. No one has a perfect relationship and if I wrote that it'd be a lie. That's why I like to write into detail, small things for them to know each other, things that will matter latter and be decisive.
    I know and I respect you so much for writing such an amazing story.
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:20am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    We do talk almost daily so it's crazy how I am able to understand where you are going with certain plotlines and develop it a bit more. I rather you not make promises anyways I love these kind of surprises, the only surprises that I actually like.
    There are a lot of people that perfer smut, no lie. I know a lot of my stories that invovle smut are a lot more popular than the ones that don't. I guess it all depends and some people aren't patient enough to read until it starts to build up. The story you have written is pretty old fashion writing style because you actually develop your characters a lot more. People are expecting Twlight status with the stories where they fall in love instantly and cannot live without each other and whatever. Your story is not pointless, boring or cheesy. It's romantic and different. sure there are some points that you might struggle to bring out, but writing it into a situation or bring in a habit of theirs can make everyone see that they are more than just a loving couple, they are flawed like everyone else. People probably think Paty and Tom are the angelic version of what a couple should be like and I know you are just getting started with it and having more twist and turns along the way.
    The reason why TT is so striaght forward is because I designed it to be that way. I wanted it to get straight to the point where SWIB takes time to develop.
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    It is special and yes, you're beginning to know me really well and I love that! But I'm not making promises of any sort.
    It is true! I mean I love SWIB A LOT, I dedicate a lot of my time to it, perfecting it but sometimes I'm afraid that I'm not being critical of it. I'm afraid that people will find it cheesy, boring and pointless when there are things that I want to convey but they are so so hidden. TT is much straight to the point if you know what I mean but for some reason I can't be like that.
    True! Me too!
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • teenagedream91

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    @ BlueDreams
    You shouldn't feel guilty, but when you said after the birth it can only mean one thing since I know you aren't really the type to go into those dark roads. they wanted this for so long, both of them. Robert wanting a child of his own and Pen now wanting one because this can be the only chance of her experiencing pregnancy and having a child of her own. There are other ways, but this way seems more special to her.
    I see and it is nice to have someone on their side, after all things have been really up and down with them lately.
    haha don't be sorry. I have a few slow paced stories and those are so much harder to develop because you are taking it step by step which I give credit for writers to do that. Its really something else.
    Whaaa? You want SWIB have a bit of TT in it? Why? You think your story can get tiring? How so love?
    They do have that appeal and trust me if I ever write about twins they are going to be same sex haha so tired of the both sex twin thing
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:47am
  • BlueDreams

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    @ teenagedream91
    Oh I'm not guaranteeing anything (I feel evil for that).
    Neither of them is organized ahah in their own particulars ways, specially Robert.
    They have been together for less than a year but the whole pregnancy thing just threw Robert really INTO the relationship, made him feel safe while Penelope is just happy to have found someone like him and be a mother by his side.
    God... I'm really slow paced aren't I? Gosh, I'm sorry.
    Envy me? Oh no, darling! You are AMAZING! I really wish that SWIB had a bit of TT in it because I feel that SWIB can get tiring while that TT doesn't. You are amazing, really believe me!
    Personally, I love same-sex twins. They have a different appeal :)
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:34am
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    @ Lloyd Christmas
    His mother is brilliant!
    And aren't proposals exciting? :D
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:30am