June 12th, 2012 at 03:56am
I wish I could write scenes like that.
but alas, I always have trouble trying to exclude my awkwardness from the scene, but you, did am amazing job. I love your language and the imagery, it's just amazing and the kissing scene with the prius going off was so adorbs. Seriously, I cannot wait to read another awesome chapter from this story!
But really.
I just think you're amaze. All the other comments about your writing are so so so true!! Ugh. Once again, DEAD. I can't even. Loves youuu