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June 11th, 2012 at 11:25pm
Ha, I love the pairing you've chosen! I scanned through it between writing a chapter for my story and it seems awesome!
The only thing I'd probably mention is to cut the paragraphs up even more so they're smaller. That way the reader doesn't feel bombarded into reading chunky paragraphs which they could mistake for being boring and a bit of a ramble :)
Keep up the good work though, this is going to be a good fic :)
