In the Shadow of Your Heart - Comments

This is amazing. Like you actually took it and made it into something of your own (like completely your own minus the band members). I loved the ending, especially–screw tragedies haha.

Garrett is my favorite person on earth. I'm glad he got Avery in the end because I liked him and Avery waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more than John and Avery. His confrontation was so cute! Adorable Garrett is adorable.

I loved the different point of views. Like that created four different perspectives on the situation at hand, instead of having it limited to just Avery's point of view or John's point of view. It made the whole thing more understandable and whatnot.

Great job! :)

This story is soooo good and I think you're an amazing writer!
Everything just flows together so well and I love it!
Keep it up!