Goodbye Isn't Always Forever - Comments

You need to update this story, like now. There is never enough Adam Burish fics floating around on this site. I love the whole parenting deal between the two of them. It's really cute. I love the way you're written it. Please come back, we need a new chapter.

Interested to see what you have planned for the epilogue

Love the update and I am sad about Adam too, I wanted him here :/

Aubrey sounds like the cutest baby ever!

Yayyy! An update, and fabulous one at that!

So glad they had some intimate time....I like this sweet side of adam

not going to lie... I'm missing this story
hopefully you update it soon :)

Hey I'm only here because of comment swap so I don't think I will read you story... No offence I'm sure it's great just not my thing and from the looks of other comments it's about hockey and that something I do not understand... Sorry I'm English we have good old football.

So I'm sorry about not reading your story and I hope you don't get pissed at me because of this. But I'm sure your story is good so good luck and keep on writing.

So I can't promise I know anything about Hockey or players or anything 'cos we don't play Hockey in England :) So this was more like an original fic for me ahhaa :D I absoloutly adore this story so much! The plot is easy to keep up with and the characters are all so cool! I am hooked on this now. Keep up the goood work! :D

I have no idea who Adam Burish is. I'm a little weird about formatting so I would recommend that when something is in a letter, that it be italicized or something to differentiate for the inner monologue. Also the sentences have a little bit of necessary editing, but no foul. The grammar and tenses definitely could use a bit of work, so I just recommend that you are more careful with your editing.

I'm sorry for sounding like such an English teacher, but it would make it easier to read. But good luck with everything and keep writing.

Like how you keep the relationship with sharpie in this.

I loved it!!

I notice it to, then I checked my junk mail box and everthing was in there. Good chapter though.

Love the chapter!!! I noticed it as well about not getting the e-mails about updates:( it sucks! thanks for updating

loved it!! I'm glad that his parents are coming to visit! that should make things interesting!

I feel like they have more they need to work out before she moves in

she should definitely move in! They're adorable together :)

I hope she moves in.

You just melted my heart of ice

He's so cute with her. I like his thoughts