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  • Bright Lights.

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    You need to update this story, like now. There is never enough Adam Burish fics floating around on this site. I love the whole parenting deal between the two of them. It's really cute. I love the way you're written it. Please come back, we need a new chapter.
    November 26th, 2012 at 10:29am
  • Kaly18

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    Interested to see what you have planned for the epilogue
    July 3rd, 2012 at 12:40am
  • missann10

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    Love the update and I am sad about Adam too, I wanted him here :/
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:10am
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    Aubrey sounds like the cutest baby ever!
    July 1st, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • rehbein

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    Yayyy! An update, and fabulous one at that!
    June 30th, 2012 at 04:57am
  • Kaly18

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    So glad they had some intimate time....I like this sweet side of adam
    June 29th, 2012 at 10:30pm
  • penschick8771

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    not going to lie... I'm missing this story
    hopefully you update it soon :)
    June 28th, 2012 at 06:59pm
  • mosher123

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    Hey I'm only here because of comment swap so I don't think I will read you story... No offence I'm sure it's great just not my thing and from the looks of other comments it's about hockey and that something I do not understand... Sorry I'm English we have good old football.

    So I'm sorry about not reading your story and I hope you don't get pissed at me because of this. But I'm sure your story is good so good luck and keep on writing.
    June 20th, 2012 at 02:17pm
  • katediplodocus

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    So I can't promise I know anything about Hockey or players or anything 'cos we don't play Hockey in England :) So this was more like an original fic for me ahhaa :D I absoloutly adore this story so much! The plot is easy to keep up with and the characters are all so cool! I am hooked on this now. Keep up the goood work! :D
    June 20th, 2012 at 01:21pm
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    I have no idea who Adam Burish is. I'm a little weird about formatting so I would recommend that when something is in a letter, that it be italicized or something to differentiate for the inner monologue. Also the sentences have a little bit of necessary editing, but no foul. The grammar and tenses definitely could use a bit of work, so I just recommend that you are more careful with your editing.

    I'm sorry for sounding like such an English teacher, but it would make it easier to read. But good luck with everything and keep writing.
    June 20th, 2012 at 10:44am
  • Kaly18

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    Like how you keep the relationship with sharpie in this.
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • JTCC1950

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    I loved it!!
    May 31st, 2012 at 08:22am
  • jonaslover100

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    I notice it to, then I checked my junk mail box and everthing was in there. Good chapter though.
    May 27th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • elizabeth87

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    Love the chapter!!! I noticed it as well about not getting the e-mails about updates:( it sucks! thanks for updating
    May 26th, 2012 at 02:36am
  • penschick8771

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    loved it!! I'm glad that his parents are coming to visit! that should make things interesting!
    May 24th, 2012 at 04:31pm
  • Kaly18

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    I feel like they have more they need to work out before she moves in
    May 22nd, 2012 at 10:37pm
  • penschick8771

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    she should definitely move in! They're adorable together :)
    May 22nd, 2012 at 05:27am
  • rehbein

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    I hope she moves in.
    May 22nd, 2012 at 02:24am
  • rehbein

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    You just melted my heart of ice
    May 20th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • Kaly18

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    He's so cute with her. I like his thoughts
    May 19th, 2012 at 10:33pm
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