Aw, sorry! I meant to comment earlier, but I was on my way to softball when I read this. Anyway, I like this chapter and the last one. It gives more detail on who Oliver really is, if that makes any sense. Keep it up! :)
Wow. I'm really into this so far, and I'm in love with your writing style. I hope you actually update everyday! That'd be amazing, I can't wait to read more. :) The layout is pretty cute, too. xx