Oooo, the summary draws you in like a haunting secret! This idea is so amazing and original, I love it! It kind of reminds me of a show that I used to watch called Harper's Island. It's kind of creepy and haunting like this plot is. Love it, really I do. But your writing is amazing. It's really descriptive and easy to follwo along with. Alot of times writers loose their readers because they assume that we know things, but you don't and I like that quite alot. Plus there's something so eerie about the name Brian Haner. I dunno it justk ind of crawls under your skin, haha. You have a real talent here, so keep it up!
so comment swap bought me here and i'm really glad it did. i haven't read anything quite like this before and i really like it. its interesting and your writing is descriptive and easy to follow. i really wanna see where you take this so i'm subscribing :)