First, I LOVE your layout. It reminds me a lot of the Taylor Swift music video "back to December". It is lovely. Second, this is very well written. There weren't many grammar or spelling mistakes which I appreciate and I'm really glad comment swap brought me here. This is one of the better stories I've read. It's very interesting. Nice job! Keep up the good work!
So cryptic. First I thought she was still in the room with the scary guy but now she's in a mental hospital? This is like obvious but not obvious at all. Is it a short story or?... Very interesting. I had to reread it to make sure I knew what was happening. I'm still not sure but I like that about the story.
Kristen :)