Holy Jesus on a bicycle, that was amazing! And I loved how John and Ginger just came and blergh I have no words for this. You write in such a good way and hey I love you my Marilyn. ;_;
THAT WAS THE MOST PERFECT THING I HAVE EVER READ asdfghjkl oh my god that entire thing was just.. I can't even describe it. It was beautiful. Beautiful beautiful beautiful. I freaking love the part where Ginger and John want to fuck like omg. I just about died reading that. And I love Twiggy's reaction. But yes, you write sex like a goddess. That's probably the coolest comment I've ever given someone. I'm going to go read this again, haha.