I'm trying to decide if this is a story or not... Based on the summary, I'm thinking it's your thoughts on death? If that's true, it might be better as a journal... If not, is it complete? Anywho, aside from the technical, I actually think that this could be a really interesting beginning to a story. I'm not sure that's at all what you intend, but I definitely think it would be worth a read if you continued it :)
May 13th, 2012 at 03:42am
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Anywho, aside from the technical, I actually think that this could be a really interesting beginning to a story. I'm not sure that's at all what you intend, but I definitely think it would be worth a read if you continued it :)