Will You Be My Guardian Angel - Comments

I love this!!!! I love frerard and high school fics, and the way you dealt with all the issues that you did was really cool. I also liked how you didn't use too much dialog, but yet I could still get how they were feeling. hope you update this again!

AH REMEMBER THIS. IT WAS AWESOME. IT IS AWESOME. I MISS THE UPDATES AND SHIT.

The good ol' days, man.

UPDATE

Love it <3 please update soon :)

XD You don't have to dedicate the chapters to me, I fix your errors gladly :D
Anyways, I read the chapter again even though I read it before you posted it XD
I think it was awesome :D
You must write more.
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

>_>

I couldnt help but to laugh at mikeys comment about bert being a dick lol xD

I read your shit, I like your shit, and you need to keep writing this shit. c:

I read your shit, I like your shit, and you need to keep writing this shit. c:

I love this story! >.<

The description is much better! I love the new chapter. ^_^

:3

So... I don't really like this story. It fucking sucks.....

HAHAHA!
Gotcha. xD
I love this story so far.
I think it's going to be fucking awesome.
Am I right?
Probably.
Anyways.
Update soon!
xoxo

Much love,
-Sapphire Sky
xoxo

I already messaged you but I wanna comment anyways...
I thought the chapter was awesome and I love how Gerard's character is.

I so saw the bathroom scene coming, it was slightly obvious and a little cliche (i hope that wasn't mean. I just wanted to point that out)

I don't get how mikey couldn't have noticed Frank though... But besides that I don't think anything else was weird and/or cliche.
I really love this story and I hope I didn't offend you >.<
Just wanted to give you advice on trying to be more original... I'm sorry if I did offend you though!
UPDATE SOON!

~Pansy Xo

Hehe, ok, the fussy me is back... :p

I always told myself that I would never stoop to that level.
-> I always told myself I would never reach that level. It seems more correct to me but it's all up to you ! :3

I nearly cried at how Gerard thinks he deserves what he lives, and at how he feels like he failed at fighting and gave up, leaving Mikey alone. Everything depression related hits me like a bullet, I don't know why ! x)

"H-Hi." my voice, still gruff from being not being used,

I couldn't look at him while telling him. I didn't know why, but I knew I just wouldn't be able to look at him.
You had switched every tense all of a sudden :p

They said you took so many pills and shots, they thought you were gonna die.

When they realized you had cut an artery

I was supposed to be the the stronger one.

I'm not supposed to be the a-authority figure.

tears were streaming down my face that had gotten a sickly pale.

More writing were on the gray walls,

Ok, I really love it so far. Gerard's way of thinking is really close to mine and I'm really curious as to how his mind will evolve throughout the whole story. I want to know if he will gain confidence and self esteem, and how.
So, to answer to your 'Author's note' "Keep or kill?" DEFINITELY KEEP! :D

I am from comment swap, and I literally screamed hallelujah when I saw it sent me on a frerard, like, FINALLY.
When reading the summary, I noticed a few mistakes but nothing that is confusing enough to make it not understandable.

He know's people around school, very few just know him.
If I got what you meant right, it should be: He knows people around school, but just a few of them know him.
I'm sorry if I got what you meant wrong, and that your sentence seems correct to you :3

People always though he wasn't sane because how calm he was
-> because of how calm he was

Sorry for being all fussy over that, I just thought it would be helpful ! I hope you don't take it bad, though? :/

If you'd like, I could beta (edit/correct) your chapters before you post them? So that it would reduce the few mistakes you make ? :D
I'd be really glad to, anyway, so just tell me on my profile if you are interested!

Alright, on my way for the first chapter now !

I'm from comment swap. First off, I must state that I have an incredible fascination with My Chemical Romance fan fictions. Second, this is an awesome story. You may want to work a bit on the description, just to make it a little clearer. Third, I recommend reading over what you've written before posting it, just to make sure you haven't repeated or left out any words. Seriously though, you're awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter! *le subscribe*

I'm in love. *_*

This is so good ! i'm in love with it already

Sounds great so far! Update soon!