Minutes of Accidental Escape - Comments

AmeliaDef (100)

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It would be super nice to have an update! I'll help you write the next chapter :p

September 22nd, 2012 at 08:10am

saveredheads (100)

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So happy you updated!!!

September 21st, 2012 at 10:28pm

saveredheads (100)

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Loving this so far :)

June 25th, 2012 at 07:15am

diorissa (100)

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totally love it. I'm looking forward for the next chaps :) <3

June 24th, 2012 at 12:39pm

unsuspecting victim; (100)

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This is awesome. Update soon?:-)

June 24th, 2012 at 02:17am

JellyBeans1666 (100)

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It's a great start. You didn't do anything wrong, your grammar is perfect in my oppinion but you could double space between paragraphs to separate them a bit. Please update soon, I feel this story has great potential (is that spelt correctly?)

June 22nd, 2012 at 10:39pm