Gosh Rixon! I love and hate him all at once. He's such a bad boy, and he's so bad to Ember, but at the same time he's so dreamy. I love this so far! I can't wait for the next update. I feel like I'm slowly starting to not like Ember as much. I mean, I still really like her. I just hope she keeps giving him as much shit as she takes from him. I think that's my favorite part about her! Love, love, love! <3
At first I was reading this and just thought, "Oh boy, this is going to be ridiculous." and the more I read the more entranced I got with the characters. I really love and hate Rixon all at once. I like Ember. The beginning was a bit much for me. I don't feel like anyone just goes up to strangers like that, but after that first meeting, the way they interact is entertaining! Your writing is really good too. You put just enough description to keep it interesting, but not so much I'm stuck reading pages without action. I love it. Can't wait for an update!