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yyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! now upadteeeeeee!!!! PLEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this Chell. I feel so bad for everyone in this story! Gah! I want to give them all hugs and pounds upon pounds of stuffed animals.

this is still amasing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously, this rocks! poor rachel, poor heather!!!!!!!! D:

O.o your story is amazing. Like for real. I'm subscribbing.

~Layla

Comment as much as you want Joan, it makes me feel happyful!!

I like it when people critic my work so next time I know what to work on. And I enjoy your smilies uber much!

PS. Big beefy black men are scary, k?

Yay!! This story is amazing! And yes I'm going to comment after every chapter.
"Crap. I’m gonna be eaten by a big beefy black man" :lmfao That was really great! I always try to find soemthing you could improve on (since you said you wanted to hear it) but I couldn't find ANYTHING to criticize on this chapter so you win!

:crazy: Yay an update! :shock: (<--Shockerd smiley :mrgreen:) You be Ms. Speedy McSpeedy with updates! I love it (and you :P) though!
More! More! More!

Now for my only criticism: The dialogue was little weird in some places, like it didn't flow right. An easily fixed thing so don't even worry about it.

Yay!!! this is soooooo good! more soon please?? :D

I LOVE IT CHELL!!! More more!
It is really good so no more telling me you can't write!
The first bit made me :shock:! Then :cheese: then ! (The last bit because you write good)
Wubbles! I'm gonna comment every chapter! And I'm your first subscriber!

By the way... PAGE CLAIM!!!!!!!!! I popped your comment cherry!
I ded this page to you!
I name this page: Jeff, The God Of Hairdoos:crazy: