Best Friend's Brother - Comments

This is a very cute story! I would suggest changing the colour of the font/background so it is easier on the eyes. Another suggestion I would make is to put lest description of every activity (got my purse, keys, and walked out of the apartment) and put more action and summarize it more. Can't wait to see what happens!

This is a very cute story! I would suggest changing the colour of the font/background so it is easier on the eyes. Another suggestion I would make is to put lest description of every activity (got my purse, keys, and walked out of the apartment) and put more action and summarize it more. Can't wait to see what happens!

Awwh I really liked reading this story. Your characterization is great and I loved how you made the characters seem like real people. I would have really lile to read a summary before the chapters, but that's totally up to you. Your words flowed nicely, for the most part and it was a bery good read, overall. Keep on writing, because you definitely have talent. :)

I liked this chapter! Ooooh, a date? :O I can't wait to see how it turns out :D

Aww, Andy is cute :D I liked this!!

Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

can't wait for the next chapter