September 5th, 2013 at 06:20am
Another Chance - Comments
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Interesting chapters. Bethany is evil and Tanner is sweet. It is all Liams fault. Popularity is nothing without the ones you care for by your sideSeptember 5th, 2013 at 05:24am
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@ Josh Cutlip.
Bethany is hated by a LOT of the readers. Some of them that leave me private comments say that she is both the perfect antagonist and at the same time the most hated character they've read in a long time.
@ thetruthmechanism
I always enjoy your comments, they are short but still convey what your favorite part (or least in the Bethany issue) of the story is. Thank you for your readership.September 5th, 2013 at 02:40am -
I hate Bethany.September 4th, 2013 at 08:37pm
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that Bethany is a bitch. she CROSSED THE LINESeptember 4th, 2013 at 08:32pm
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Comment Swap!
I wanna apologize right away and tell you that I can't give you all too much feedback, because this story is just not for me at all. I tried getting into it and read the first chapter to be fair, but it's just not my cup of tea.
I do want to let you know that you have really nice writing. I've had a few 1D fics in comment swap already and what I noticed often is how poorly they are written. You have a good sense of describing things and adding nice small details. There COULD still be a bit more, but I still think it's quite nice the way it is, writing wise. So stick with the fans of the story and go on.August 24th, 2013 at 02:29pm -
oooh its just about to get really interesting. I really like this chapter. well actually the last three chapters and i really cant wait for you to update. So please do it soon:)August 18th, 2013 at 07:15pm
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I see the match blazing.August 12th, 2013 at 04:35am
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gah, I love this story so mucuuuch! I spent the day reading this and I fell in love with it rather quickly. I honestly hate Bethany though. She can just...go away. But gah, I can't wait to read more!August 7th, 2013 at 04:48am
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liam is so jealous XDAugust 7th, 2013 at 04:00am
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i love how david's flirting techniques include puppy eyes and pretty pleases :)August 6th, 2013 at 08:03pm
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments! It means a lot to me, to have a small amount of comments from people who like the story versus a ton of comments from people who skimmed it. Or from people just yelling UPDATE! at me.
You all are amazing.August 6th, 2013 at 04:47pm -
I see the building burning down. lolAugust 6th, 2013 at 09:16am
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All the feelsJuly 23rd, 2013 at 06:58am
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Interesting. How shall this event prosper?July 12th, 2013 at 06:25am
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@ thetruthmechanism
Aw, I'm not trying to kill you! It's just the next two chapters could get really congusing if I dint write them rightJuly 11th, 2013 at 12:32am -
the suspense! why do you kill us?July 10th, 2013 at 09:17pm
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I know, I came back to multiple private messages which made me kick myself in the rear. Not that I havent wanted to update, more that I havent been able to due too a little writers block. I apologize for my failure to inform you all :)July 10th, 2013 at 06:12am
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i always love it when you updateJuly 10th, 2013 at 12:28am
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Wow.
Just wow.
That was amazing.October 12th, 2012 at 01:07am
Pretty much, yea. I wanted these to be the moral story part; since I'm thinking about wrapping this one soon.