Heal All Her Wounds - Comments

Love MattG! Love this story!

Amazing story. :) Keep it up<3. x

(this isn't letting me comment my entire comment so i'm rewriting it lol)
so, very interestingly written, i'm curious to see where you're taking it! It has a lot of potential.
You're writing in third person, because all the actions Ithil is doing, have to be in third person as well.
How old is Ithil? What grade? She seems very mature, and I enjoy that in characters! Keep it up!

very interestingly written, i'm curious to see where you're taking it :) keep it up

I've been reading this all night. It's a great story & really deserves to be published. I'm hooked & been wanting a good read, now I found something good to read. I love it. Thank you for the great story (:

very good update :)

I didn't expect her to be Asian. Unless you were talking about someone else. But good update. c:

Nicely written :) and I really like the way she ignores the assholes who are making fun of her.