Interesting song choice. I had never quite thought of the song having a meaning like this before, but now it seems almost as if that is what it had been saying the entire time. I especially enjoyed your incorporation of the lyrics into the very end of the piece. Although this is a drabble and is meant to be short and succinct, a suggestion to incorporate more feeling into the piece would be if you explained the physical feelings of the body rather than simply the emotional feel of the protagonist towards their love. Very well done :)
May 20th, 2012 at 01:01am