So, I have to say, I was so stoked to find this story. It's like... a miss-mash of Maximum Ride and Avengers, two things I really love. Tony and Steve's characters are really spot-on, and Erin makes me laugh. Oh, so many laughs. But I've super excited to see where this will go, so keep on writing! :]
Dude your story is amazing. It almost feels like I know you by reading this story. Ya so anyways i enjoyed how you portrayed Tony Stark as a panty-dropping whore. He is a badass. I like your writing style and how descriptive you are. Love you roommate