Life as We Know It - Comments

Dear author, the comment swap thingy brought me here to this complete story of yours and even though I didn't read the whole thing, I have subscribed and I'll come back to read it till the end. I believe you could have made the summary more interesting. Other than that, I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. You did a good job with the descriptions as well as the dialogue. I find this story to be a good one. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

Dear author, the comment swap thingy brought me here to this complete story of yours and even though I didn't read the whole thing, I have subscribed and I'll come back to read it till the end. I believe you could have made the summary more interesting. Other than that, I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. You did a good job with the descriptions as well as the dialogue. I find this story to be a good one. That's all from me so bye. ~Marian.

The story has an endearing premise, but there are a number of minor spelling and grammatical errors that make it difficult to read at times. With a bit of polish, I think this piece could really shine.

This is really cute. I've finished the 2nd chapter, and I'll read the rest some other time. I really enjoy your story layout aswell.

This is very sweet. I only read the first chapter, but I can see myself reading the rest in the future.

There were a few (minor) errors that have very little to do with writing ability, so I have nothing to say but good things about your descriptions, etc.

Your layout is very pretty, too :) Keep writing! x

Actually, I've only managed to read a few chapters (for I'm not in the mood yet for long stories) but I think that if someone wants a good, long story to read, then this one would be perf (:

I like your layout, even though the font is a bit too big; it's still okay (:

This is cute & has a great plot (:
Although, your writing could do a bit of polishing, it's cool and otherwise; really sweet ;D

its over :'(

loved it but sad its over :(

Happy ending! And now I'm crying :') <3

:')

Yey! :D But :(, only a few more chapters? :( :(

This is a cute story!

WHOO!! You finally updated!! :D Love this chapter! <3

can't read on*

The summary was interesting, so that's good. :)

The first chapter lacked of periods. But as I read on, it improved. Just a thought to fix those in the beginning because that's what sets the reader off in your story. And I see Skyscraper is editing it so it should turn out pretty good on those errors.

I find this story very cute. Cameron in the beginning being all shy made me giggle. "GET IT GIRL." AHHAHA reminds me of Mikey. :)

I have to be honest, I can't read. The way it was written is bothering me so I went up to about 20 chapters. From what I read, I thought it has a good storyline and plot.

Keep it up! :)

Aww, they're soo cute!! <3

:D

i need more of this!! XD ♥

Aww!! <3 :D