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  • ParanormalcyC6

    ParanormalcyC6 (100)

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    Really good idea, I like the story a lot. It kept my interest through out all three chapters but then you cut chapter three in the middle of a dialogue. Was that intentional? Or is my computer messing the page up? Lol anyway really good, you have 1 more subscriber :)
    June 10th, 2012 at 05:01pm
  • bless

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    -Comment Swap has brought me here.
    Firstly the background is a bit visually unpleasing, white on black tends to a bit distracting.
    Other than that you write well, and your summary was very captivating. Nice length of chapters as well.
    June 10th, 2012 at 04:37am
  • panda_saurs_rex

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    please update soon please please
    May 17th, 2012 at 01:14am
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