Brian and Libby needs to screw their head in straight becuz they r driving me up the wall with their confusion like seriously Brian how hard is it to say tht u don't want to play anymore and u r taking Libby home and the same goes for Libby she could simple say she doesn't want to play but noooo u two r too stubborn to do it and Brian start shoving ur foot in ur mouth becuz u r not thinking before u speak u called Libby a slut twice already u need to stop and start apologizing and even tho Libby said u shouldn't come over u should have done it and prove tht u r sorry and another thing stop playing these games with her becuz it's confusing her if u like her thn u do if not stop gettin mad and jealous tht she is fucking the other guys but u becuz remember its a game.....the smut scenes with Matt, Johnny and Zacky were hot as hell it was like sex galore in three little chapters....i think u should do a POV on Brian to see how he feels and thinks about Libby and is it possible to do other chapters without having to revolve around sex like what exactly does the girls do for a living, im sure the guys r in a band so no need to kno what they do, and a background story on how the game tht is being played began in the first place, overall it's a good story love the sex and the mini drama between Brian and Libby, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
June 5th, 2012 at 10:50pm
