I already subscribed to the new story and it hasn't even started yet. Haha. But for real. My heart is breaking for both of them-- I want them to realize that Charlie is playing the shit out of both of them, that conniving little douche bag. Rah. Anyways. I'm looking forward to the next update!
OKAY ARE YOU SERIOUS seriously SERIOUSLY Y U DO DIS 2 ME BE STILL, MY HEART! DUDE I AM DYING HERE! is it your goal to kill your readers, or BECAUSE IF IT IS, YOU'RE WELL OVER ACCOMPLISHING IT /DEAD why did you have to end it there though seriously CLIFFHANGERS CAN SUCK MY DICK or um yeah. please update soon.
1. YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON OR I'M GOING TO DIE 2. omfg 4 or 5 more chapters!? NOOOOOO!!! This cannot end. Can you make like a sequel? do something omg. 3. this is my favorite story. I reread it like all the time 4. I love you, alright bye<3
Ugh this story makes my heart hurt. :( Stupid fucking Charlie messing with perfectly imperfect Alice and John. I hate him I just want to punch him in his stupid doctor face!! Poor Alice. Update, soon! Please can't wait to se what happens next! :)
No no no no no no nooooooo!! Charlie is a shit face and I don't like him. He needs to be run over by a stampede of llamas and rhinos. Okay so now that that's out of my system.... I don't really like John right now either. I do understand what he's getting at but seriously why is he being a girl about it and jumping to conclusions. Also, Alice needs to figure out her shit. I'm done being critical about the characters now :) This update was definitely a game changer!!!
Or maybe she could be going through her phone and see that there was a phone call from John and it was answered and she could call and see what happened.
Or maybe she could be going through her phone and see that there was a phone call from John and it was answered and she could call and see what happened.