Something Very Unpredictable - Comments

I like it :) Green Day is, of course, my life *gestures randomly at username* and Doctor Who, lolol. I was like... Who are these people? They scare me, and then 'raven hair' and 'green eyes' and 'ice blue eyes' and I was like, It's Billie and Mike. Mike or Tre. Mike. *facepalm*

It's amazing.

Thanks(:

You have a wonderful writing style!! I'm at a bit of a disadvantage, as I haven't had the pleasure of watching Doctor Who for quite some time (though I was a big fan in college, umpteen years ago!), but you balance dialogue and expression, action and narration, just perfectly. Your descriptions are vivid, too, which really brings a story to life in the reader's mind. Kudos and bravo!!!