ANOTHER!!!! amazing update : ) In terms of where i want to see this story go...umm...i think it would be nice to see what happens to their relationship when he is required to go back to play hockey, you can cont. on that route. That would be a great idea if you are going to write a long story. How long are you planning on making this story, because its really amazing and unique?
I just finished reading this and it is fucking hot, I love it! You write great sex scenes and the chemistry between them is so hot, it's awesome. Can't wait to read more
OMG, that was....WOW!!! The the events that happen in this chapter really put their relationship to a test. I can't wait to see whats going to happen to the relationship between the three of them. MORE PLEASE : )
AMAZING UPDATE!!! I cant wait for more. I can't wait to see what going to go on between Mike, Jeff and her. Also i can't wait to see what happens when Mike see the bruise that was left on her arm by that idiot : ) PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN