I'm just screaming, oh my god, that was so fucking amazing. I've wanted a fanfic like this pretty much since I first heard Pistol Whipped; almost for a month then. I've said it before, and I'm saying it again; you write in such an awesome way, and you're just the fucking greatest author ever, and I have no words even, you're amazing and oh my god, I don't even know. Just fucking thank you for writing it, that's all I can say.
This is... It's just.... GAH! I can't express how fucking Alice-in-wonderland-wonderful this is! Good God, man, with the way you write you are opt to make SOME lonely fan girls VERY HAPPY with this story. This is so wonderful and.... highly abusively arousing lol. Congrats, you're one of very few people that can make a sexually arousing abuse story. Cookie for you. j/kj/k. Very good, keep writing.
hA I saw this on tumblr now first comment - bam. But jesus fucking christ actually I think I am completely and utterly d e a d. You've killed me Elizabeth, actually - the way Marilyn talked to Twiggy I should've been cringing but instead I think I've knawed off my thumb I had to ~retain the noises~ as my family are here and jesus c h r i s t that is so perfect it hurts.