If You Can't Hang. - Comments

& this is for the last chapter because apparently it never got sent to my email and I never got to read it but I would just like to say that Kellin that you are a complete asshole! BITCH!

Oh man, poor Oli! I hope he hooks up with this Bill Will guy! He needs him some old southern hospitality right now!

Oh no, Oli, you poor thing! I hope everything works out okay for him. )':

It's really sad how they don't notice Oli never came back until the waiter mentions it.

I would very much like to smack Kellin right about now! He is a silly, silly boy. But seriously, you should update soon so we can find out where the heck Oli has gone off too :o

Also, I didn't know PTV were releasing another new song, woooo exciting!

OH MY GOD THIS IS BRILLIANT YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE SOOOON HOLY SWEET DICKS JDJEUIFJEBFRICNEUKFDKUE

Omg, please update soon! This story is so good I hadddddd to recommend it! :-)

D: OH NO! Stupid whore sleeping with Oli and Vic and then silly Vic being all emotional and getting into a car accident! Oh goodness, the drama. So now, Vic just needs to be in hospital and Kellin will go visit him and profess his undying love, hahaha. :P

I haven't heard the song yet but I bet it' as awesome as everyone says it is.
And Ana is definitely my least favorite character. She can just go...
I hope this is Kellin finally seeing through Ana's lies and when he recovers he dumps her arse.

Firstly, THE SONG IS THE MOST PERFECT THING. VIC AND KELLIN TOGETHER MAKING MUISC (AND LOVE) AND JUST GENERALLY BEING PERFECT HUMAN BEINGS. Yep. That's about how I feel about the song. My friend was over for a concert and it sucked 'cause I just wanted to sit there and listen to the song on repeat, haha.

Anyway, concerning the actual story, Ana is a bitch who is obviously doing shit with Taylor and need to fuck right off now, that'd be great. Also Kellin passing out on the sidewalk, oh goodness, that boy! :o
Can't wait for some more! In the mean time i'll go back to listening to King for a Day and wishing this story was real life.

oh man, I can't believe Kellin told Ana! he really is too good for her. I hope he'll end up with Vic real soon, they're so cute perfect together, I love their chemistry and you can just tell they actually care about each other. I'm excited for more! (that's me listening to King for a Day while I'm waiting for an update haha)

I'm glad I came across this story. It's sofun to read. I'm really falling in love with this story.

KELLIN QUINN, WHAT ARE YOU DOING, YOU SILLY BOY? There, got that out. I can't believe he went and had sex with Ana and he keeps making Vic sad and ahh, stop being such a silly boy! I bet Ana wasn't staying with some girls last night either. He should just realise that Ana doesn't deserve him and that everything will just be better if they break up and he and Vic can live happily ever after~ Haha. I can't wait for more!

I'm really glad Kellin pulled himself together and finished recording with them. when they left together to go pick up Ana I was sooo hoping something would happen between them, haha. she's probably all mad at Kellin and sulking, I hope he realizes soon that she doesn't deserve him. Vic needs to make him see that :p they are the cutest thing together, I was almost shouting at Vic when he kept being stubborn and not accepting the blanket and as soon as they went into the backseat it was just AWWWW. I love how you wrote that scene and also, that storm was a brilliant idea.

OH MY GOSH. Cute, fun times in the back of the car, hehe. This was just a great chapter and now i'm excited what happens after this, if it'll actually progress into something from there or if they'll both go and pretend it never happened.

Also, I love how quickly you update, it's wonderful! Keep it up :P

AH JUST. AHHHH. I'm so nervous about what's gonna happen now D: You're so making something bad happen, aren't you?! Preferably Kellin walks in on Ana cheating on him so then he can come to his senses and realize he needs to be with Vic, yep.

So excited for the full song of their song together though it's going to be so perfect and it's going to somehow make this fic more perfect and real and ahh. -flails-
Ahem. Anyway. I can't wait for you to update again!

I haven't got to comment on the last couple of chapters aw :c
But this story is still amazing~ I'm glad Kellin and Vic are at least trying to patch things up!
I only have one thing to say again this, and I promise it's not a very big thing- you write your dialogue in a block format, and that's not the correct way to write it. I'm sorry, it's just a pet peeve of mine... In any case, I love this story cc:

two chapters in one day, omg! perfect thing to wake up to
okay. Oli is so funny in this fic and I love how he's trying to make Vic and Kellin make up. they'd be so cute together. even though I haven't listened to the snippet I think it's awesome that you mentioned their collaboration, I like when real events happen in fics and it fits perfectly here. also the Holly is Oli with an H thing, I love you for putting that in there! so yeah, I pretty much like everything about this <3

That something shoved up Kellin's ass is Annas penis!! Uh! It's all her fault! And okay I know that I read alot of these kinds of fanfics, but at least one of these pairings has to be true? Right? Idk maybe I'm just a wierdo, but I think that at least one is real:P

Hahaha, omg i've listened to the PTV clip with Kellin so much it's ridiculous but it's so perfect, how could I not? And I think it's so awesome that they did it just for the fans. Also it's completely funny that it's like this fic, maybe they make out in bathrooms too.
Anyway, song aside, those two are so awkward around each other now, they are so silly, we all know you both just wanna tell each other how into one another you are :P