Sorry its taken so long I just not got the comment that you had the pro up I really need to check my email more...
So love the layout....
I think you did great with the length and everything for just an introduction I think you made it the right length, gave us a good bit of info with out giving the whole story away and left me wanting more all of which I look for in a story so good job...
I find you description of the kids at school because I've heard kids at my school talk about and spread rumors and thats just how they start so you did good there, I'm really curious to find out about how she ended up Preggers and evrything please update soon..
YAY TEEN PREGNANCY! This seems like it will be fun despite the fact that she's preggers and people are saying mean things about her. I don't usually read preggo stories but I like this one asdkjhfajksjdf