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Yay, so I finally got a chance to read this! And I absolutely love it already! :D
Can't wait to see what all you have in store for it!
Subscribed and recommended! :D

The lyrics from One Direction made me smile :p Jassa seems like a really cool new character. I think I've warmed to her already. She's excitable and ready to help. I really like your characters by the way, all of them at the moment. I liked it when Willem said, "You see, she says stupid things like these all the time. I don't know if it's a habit or a second nature." And that plans sounds really interesting...I can't wait to see what happens next!
And your gif in the authors note lol. I'm the same with updating...absolutely awful :)

I like how she calls him Keefey, I do the same thing with my sister and she gets annoyed too :p I liked this chapter a lot, it showed the relationship between her family and herself and with her friend Lani. It was very good. I can't wait for more! Oh and I don't know if I mentioned this before, but I LOVE the layout.

You got me hooked on the summary and that obviously shows that a story is gonna be good. The first chapter is perfect, brilliant even. I'm already wanting to read more. For some odd reason, I like Willem's character :p and Finn too aha. So yeah. Update? Because if you do, I will be very happy. I'm loving this.