It Has To Be You Love, That I've Been Dreaming Of - Comments

why is Amelia even butting into this? She can handle herself just fine. I get why she's a bit worrisome though, her husband's about to go under to have surgery! I'd be buggin' out too haha.

Yay! Austin's surgery was a success :). And I actually really like that Fizz is a skater, it adds a nice element to the story. But, I think Amelia should be nicer to her, she did just rearrange her whole damn house - I feel a bad rivalry between the two forming in the future.

I like how casual Fizz and Austin are together, it shows the vibe that they've been friends for a really long time. I'm actually really excited to see exactly how they met :). I think it's adorable how Austin is literally begging to go to the beach. He has to be safe! Surgery takes a lot out of you, kid needs to stay home haha. Oh gosh, I knew Amelia would find them, I just knew it - dammit. Amelia really neds to calm her shit. She has to realize that Austin is completely capable of making his own decisions, UGH. please update soon!

I must say I really, really like this story, but I noticed something. Your sentences are funky, and the topics in them should be two separate sentences, but you put them into one. There are also some comma issues that I've seen. I notice the same thing in my writing after re-reading twice, maybe try that ? Seriously, not trying to be mean at all, and I know it sounds that way and I'm so sorry, but I'm just trying to make a suggestion, I swear :).

Oh my god. You better fucking update this story soon! I swear I am in love with this story, jesus christ. This story is really amazing!! Really well written too, I can't believe how much I actually like this story. Please update soon <3

How can this only have two comments? I love it. I hope there will be more. :)

I love this. So much. Don't keep me waiting!
I just want Austin to tell Amelia to fuck off.

I really do like the beginning of this story. I hope you continue to write. Keep up the great work.