Crash - Comments

Nice story! I enjoyed the layout of it.

I like your layout, it’s simple and easy to read and it goes well with the theme of the story. The summary drew me right into the story and left me wanting more. I didn’t find many errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation so that’s good. The story flows very nicely and overall it’s an awesome story, just not in my choice of stories. Keep writing, it’s worth reading!

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I really like the plot to this story. I love that they didn't end up together and that you have to infer if they ever do get back together. It was very different compared to so many Alex Gaskarth fics, or even All Time Low fics in general. I enjoyed it very much. Definitely keep writing!(:

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I really like the plot to this story. I love that they didn't end up together and that you have to infer if they ever do get back together. It was very different compared to so many Alex Gaskarth fics, or even All Time Low fics in general. I enjoyed it very much. Definitely keep writing!(:

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This is pretty well written. The one thing I would say though is to make sure to use quotation marks instead of `` because it looks more proper, I guess. Great writing, though. :) Try to break up the long paragraphs if you can, but other than that, good job! :)