Light up the Sky - Comments

Omfg!! I just finished reading this story & its so Beautiful :o Please make a Sequel ;-; i really love this too much ;-; my life actually related to Mikeys :( ;-; but please make a Sequel it would make the story Awesome :D

--first time reader--

I liked this story!

I think you ended that in a very good way. I wasn't expecting it to end so soon but in a way, it didn't seem just randomly out of nowhere; it was the perfect spot.

I was kind of thinking that you would continue this for awhile, at least until their relationship kind of advanced a bit more, but I'm glad you didn't make this all smutty; it just makes that kiss they shared mean that much more. And in the mental and physical states they were both in, I don't think sex really would have been much on an option.

I'm really glad that you didn't make them just realize all at once that they had a problem and they were immediatly cured. You kind of left it hanging, so we're left wondering how everything really turns out.

Whether you do a sequel or not, I'd just like to say that you did a really good job with this story and although I'm sad to see it finish so soon, I will be sure to re-read it in the future.
(:

AWH!
That was an adorable ending!
xD
it really was.
I loved it.

ahh! but you HAVE to make a sequel cause like... lol idk cause i said so and i bet others think so and like i want to know what happens. like do they get better? do they for real fall in love and everything?
anyways i liked it lots. plz make a sequel?

-sniffle-

It's... over?
Ohh, I'd love a sequel, if you can ?
Loved the last chapter... it did seem a little rushed - no offence, but I feel you could've expanded a little more. Either way, i really enjoyed it, so I'm gonna stay subscribed, just in case there's a sequel.

xoxo.

NOOOO!
I DEMAND A SEQUEL!! D:

Hmm.. I'm not sure. I mean, it was written beautufully, and I loved that last scene.. but..

Well, they hadn't really known each other that well, or for long. And I'm kinda surprised it finished quite like that.
I mean, you spent so long expanding and explaining Mikey's character.. and it just feels as though it could have gone on a bit longer while their relationship grew, before they realised how much they needed each other, etc.

But hey, I liked the story as a whole, I'm gonna stay subscribed in case there's a sequel =)

xoxox

That ending was beautiful.

I loved this story.

I would love a sequel though...

.....It's over?

This is definitely one of the best stories on mibba, I hate that's it ended.

Beautiful ending though. The best part was "He lit up my sky when it was dark", I love the way you tied in the title.

Congratulations for writing such an amazing story.

NOOOOOOOO!

GRR!!

SEQUEL!

I demand a sequel!!

UPDATE SPOON!

...that was ... i have no words to describe it perfectly :)
it's so cute that they can't be without each other, and how they've each grown on the other. :)
is soo cute :)

awwwwwwwwwwwwh!!!
that was such a sweet ending!!!
amazing story
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It's completed? but.. it's so good.. it can't be over already! :o can't you write a sequel?

I'm gonna miss this so much..

oh my god!
that was intense.
i can't believe frank listened to mikey and ate.
i found it kind of amusing though when frank started hitting his head off the table.
can't wait for more !
xD

0-0 Whoa, is Frankie ok?

Oh my goodness.
He's like... oh my goodness.
You can't leave us like that!
More soon please!
Pretty please!

Wow, that was amazing
I loved the way you wrote that whole breakdown scene
More when you can (:

=D
AHH-mazing!