I definitely find the plot interesting, it's not something predictable but it's easy to get a grasp on which is nice. Other than just a couple spelling errors it's very well written. One suggestion would be to change the color of your lettering and make it a little lighter, it's tough to see. But the layout is great, it matches the story well. Keep up the good work!
July 16th, 2012 at 06:15am