This Is Bonkers - Comments

I love this so much!! I would love to see more MitchxHaz fluff but I just enjoy reading these updates anyway. Sam, Jade, Haz and Mitch are like a family! They play games, order in, run to the store to get each other stuff... they're just like the perfect family :) I wonder if the paparazzi are going to cause any trouble with them?

@ Wynnie Shawn
Hi! I'm Canadian too, so I know that sweatpants is said more often than joggers.. The idea is that Haz is very interested in Britain, so she has said a lot of those words even before "moving" there. And now that she lives there, they've unintentionally become part of her vocabulary. I'll definitely keep what you said in mind though, sometimes she does seem a little too british! And on the paragraph thing, I know, haha. Some of the chapters are really bad! My writing has improved a little, so that helps. But I also find mibba kind of frustrating when it comes to spacing :/ And thankyou for the compliments <3

Ah I love this! You should continue :) but it would be a lot easier to read if you spaced out the paragraphs more. Also, make sure you're talking like you're from Canada because I noticed some of the language you used is a bit different. Like I'm from Canada and I say sweatpants instead of trousers or joggers. Another tip to use would be to add more conflict. Like Haz going back to Canada or bullies at school or something. Just to make it a bit more interesting!
It's really weird though because me and Haz are kind of alike! We're both from Canada and we're both vegetarian :) Keep up the good work and I hope you come off hiatus soon!

Wow this is a super brill story

omg i proper love diversity nd mitch and your story is amaze soo far :D xxx