I'm here to judge the entries for The Most Beautiful Lyrics.
Your layout is really lovely, I like that the background fits in really well with the banner image and how everything seems to give off the vibe of being in this seedy motel. It fits in really well with the story and although you aren't being marked on the layouts, I think these things add to the story overall.
And onto the content. I'm not a Pierce the Veil fan, so I was really happy to see that this reads well as original fiction as well. You've put in enough information so that the reader doesn't need to know anything about the characters before they begin reading and in fanfiction, I think that's difficult to do so major kudos to you for that. This didn't actually end the way I thought it would either. I had it set up in my mind that Jamie would find out that River didn't love him and would be completely heartbroken but you twisted that view right at the very end and I love that. It's such an unusual ending to a story like this and it makes me wonder what'll happen in the future. This definitely has the potential to become a fully chaptered story but I think I prefer it like this. It's short and to the point, but it leaves you to formulate your own ending which is really nice. Your writing style is really lovely as well, descriptive without being too descriptive and everything flows together really nicely.
Grammar and spelling weren't a problem at all, so well done on that!
All-in-all, lovely little piece that really does make you think. An interesting read, most definitely. Thanks for entering!
Your layout is really lovely, I like that the background fits in really well with the banner image and how everything seems to give off the vibe of being in this seedy motel. It fits in really well with the story and although you aren't being marked on the layouts, I think these things add to the story overall.
And onto the content. I'm not a Pierce the Veil fan, so I was really happy to see that this reads well as original fiction as well. You've put in enough information so that the reader doesn't need to know anything about the characters before they begin reading and in fanfiction, I think that's difficult to do so major kudos to you for that. This didn't actually end the way I thought it would either. I had it set up in my mind that Jamie would find out that River didn't love him and would be completely heartbroken but you twisted that view right at the very end and I love that. It's such an unusual ending to a story like this and it makes me wonder what'll happen in the future. This definitely has the potential to become a fully chaptered story but I think I prefer it like this. It's short and to the point, but it leaves you to formulate your own ending which is really nice. Your writing style is really lovely as well, descriptive without being too descriptive and everything flows together really nicely.
Grammar and spelling weren't a problem at all, so well done on that!
All-in-all, lovely little piece that really does make you think. An interesting read, most definitely. Thanks for entering!